rachg82

This is beautiful. It is fiction, but it is poetry. I caught most of the quoted lines and thought their placement was PERFECT. Your use of words and arrangement of images and ideas...it's gorgeous and lyrical and brilliant. To tell a story in this style, in a poem, in a linear-non-linear-narrative-yet-non-narrative way that is utterly true to the characters with excellent POV shifts that are clear and in voice and well chosen and....I don't have enough words for what brilliance this piece of work is, being all forms all at once and doing more than most stories OR poems ever do. And it's Booth and Brennan and Cam and Hannah (whom I also love) and WONDERFUL...and "she will know her true name"...LOVE. Love them meeting in *challenge* and with Booth able, just a bit more, to accept that he's worthy, and her able, so much more, to *feel* and be present.

This is amazing.