This was really lovely. I liked the calm acceptance of Bill; how he misses Laura but knows he’ll see her again after death. I think this was my favorite line:
The child in him was worried she might get cold
I like the idea of Bill thinking this and knowing it’s childish, but not being able to help himself from still worrying about her. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2011-07-15 10:05 pm (UTC)The child in him was worried she might get cold
I like the idea of Bill thinking this and knowing it’s childish, but not being able to help himself from still worrying about her. Thanks for sharing.