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Date: 2011-07-15 07:05 pm (UTC)
Oh wow. I still usually avoid Daybreak fic, but had to peek since this is your first BSG piece. I'm so, so glad I did. This was beautiful.

These lines really, really hit me:

In the end,
he buried her by hand,
dirt gathering beneath his fingers,
rocks piling above her lips.

It seemed wrong somehow,
putting anything but him above her.


I'm so glad you decided to post this.
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